So in my crit it was suggested to make a bigger thing of the fact that it is their birthday. I rethought the logo but it still isn't clicking. I like it by itself but looks terrible applied to things. I think I need to step back and introduce textures into the informative packaging/handout owl. I am going to buy some felt and see what I can do with cut outs of shapes to make the handout more interactive and fun. I need to keep it clean and modern still however I think that this will tie together the design a little more.
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